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Seventeen years ago, five countries were established under a single recognized union. All had their own ruler, their own laws, and harmony was present. Every country had their own specialties they shared in exchange with the other countries in the union...

Eru'Tamet: Eru'Tamet is a heat-tarnished land of volcanoes, rivers of lava, and yet somehow has the healthiest crops in any of the other countries.
Gizma: The land of Gizma is always cloudy and bleak, of which crops have a horrible time growing; so the citizens have turned to the coal and steel mines established to continue their specialty; weapon invention and production, as well as the development of trains and a rail system.
Aracena: Aracena is one of two island-countries. The people of this island are VERY in-depth with the spirits of the afterlife, and are known to ascend to gods and goddesses of other countries, as well as communicate with the dead for many reasons; even as a military strategy.
Aurore: The island of Aurore is difficult to get to. The main theme of the whole island is water, and it is very well known for it's live connection to a god and goddess. They also have an incredible ability to control water.
Chark: The country of Chark have dominion over wind and electricity, and they are the most peaceful of all the countries. Ironicly, they also have the most powerful military.

But within those seventeen years, the king of Gizma, Nicholi Paraki; has fled his country, leaving his wife, the Queen of Eru'Tamet, Sasaril Paraki; control over Gizma as well.

Our story begins in an underground building, which is at the foot of an incredible castle, who's largest tower reaches into the heavens. The roof of this building is actually partially broken, mainly because of poor upkeep. From the light shining in from the broken roof cast a glow over ankle-deep water, probably from the years of rain. The room was a throne room of some kind, untouched in seventeen years. The water began to ripple slowly, as a slushing sound was heard, like something heavy had landed in the water. Then the same sound was heard again. Two people had dropped in through the hole in the roof.

"This place reeks..." Said a young girl. She couldn't see hardly anything... the underground room was so dark! Two torches lit up, lighting the room instantly. The girl was about seventeen years old, and had black hair and purple eyes... both of which seemed to equal the one she was with, who was a much older male, her father, actually. Though with the way he wrapped up all but his eyes and hair, he looked more like a ninja than anything else.

"It probably does. Your mother never took care of it. In fact..." He then walked through the water to a wall at the opposite side, and placed a hand on it. "...just as I thought. This was the entrance, and she sealed it off." He turned back and walked back to her. "This was supposed to be your throne... had things not gone the way they did." He also crossed his arms "...the family weapons are still hidden here, too."

"...how do you know?" "Because they're rigged with a trap. If anyone had tried to move the box, this whole building would have collapsed in on them." Someone else dropped down from above to join them. It was a woman who has green hair, and red eyes. She chose to wore a black dress which looked more like a ballroom dance dress than something... actually fitting for the occasion.

"Nicholi... shouldn't we be getting out of here? Sasaril knows you're here..." "I know. I want her to know. I want her to know her tyranny ends now." The room shook lightly, and dust fell from above, causing the two girls to cough. Nicholi was unaffected, because his mouth was covered. The room shook again, and the wall where he was examining earlier exploded with incredible force; sending large rocks hurtling twords the three. The young girl screamed in fear, but Nicholi showed no signs of being scared. He pulled out five specially designed knives and threw them all with one throw. Each knife stabbed into one of the five large rocks. He then pulled out a handgun, pointed the weapon, and fired two shots per knife. Upon each knife being hit twice, they would then explode, safely shattering all the boulders into billions of tiny fragments. Soldiers in purple, Nicholi's own damn military; came running in carrying rifles that fire three shots every time the trigger is pulled.

Nicholi made a deep glare as he pulled back on the rear of the handgun. Two unshot bullets fell out, and splooshed into the water. He then stomped on the ground, which splashed water onto his daughter's face; and the two rounds bounced up into the air. He grabbed both of them, and threw them just like he threw the knives, and each bullet penetrated into the heads of two soldiers. They dropped quickly, and Nicholi took this time to reload the weapon's 12-round clip. "Gatekeeper... keep Saka safe, and both of you follow me." Nicholi had only one objective right now. Sasaril knew he had returned. She knew he was back. Now his only mission was to escape here to continue the battle. Would he be able to?
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Author's Comments

Well. Here's my massive Fire Emblem-world story, using all origional characters. This story is huge. It's so big, It's going to take five books to tell the whole tale. Wow.

Anyways, now onto the credits!

All the countries except Eru'Tamet are mine.

All the characters except for Sasaril are mine.

Sasaril and Eru'Tamet belong to :iconkraken-terrorist:

I hope you enjoy.

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:iconkraken-terrorist:
Looking good so far, looking forward to the next chapters!

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We must embrace pain and burn it as fuel for our journey, for it is ineviatable, might as well find a use for it.
:iconhavoc-hedgehog-gamma:
Thank you ^^

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ZERO: I never cared about justice, and I don't recall ever calling myself a hero... I have always only fought for the people I believe in. I won't hesitate... If an enemy appears in front of me, I will destroy it!
:iconcaroamy:
This is really interesting! Can't wait for more.

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:iconhavoc-hedgehog-gamma:
Then you'll get more! 8D

Eventually.

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ZERO: I never cared about justice, and I don't recall ever calling myself a hero... I have always only fought for the people I believe in. I won't hesitate... If an enemy appears in front of me, I will destroy it!
:iconcaroamy:
Haha, I'll wait.

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:iconorzo-the-berserk:
--Tiny Comment--

"Steel Mines" - No such thing. Steel isn't naturally made.
Suggest changing to "Iron Mines" and/or "Steel Mills".

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"Who I am is not important. My message is." - Revan

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